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Warped

It had all started to fall apart two years before, when her mother had nearly died of a heart condition. Those few months, spent in grief in the form of hospital beds, life-changing phone calls and numbness, had been an ominous omen for what was to come.


The next year had been fine. She'd just entered middle school, and sixth grade felt amazing. And then. Summer came in the form of sweltering heat, lazy days, and she lost touch with her friends. And then. Seventh grade started. The worst part was knowing, right then and there on day one, that she no longer fit in, no longer belonged. One by one, her old friends became cool and too good for her. One by one she grieved them in turn. Her true friends, unfortunately and unfairly, were not enough. They were different than what she wanted, and though she tried to make them what she needed, it didn't work. Slowly she closed herself off from them, hiding away from the world to cry in peace. It became unbearable.


One cut tie stood out more than the others. It was this one that caused the most pain, slowly but surely breaking her down. Each time he laughed, she wanted to smile in return...until she remembered that his humor was no longer directed at her. Until she remembered that to him she no longer existed. And she fought back the tears until she was alone.


She watched as one by one the pieces of her life shattered and came crashing to the ground like the shards of a broken mirror. The kind that you can try to fix but the pieces won't fit together like they did before; and in the end, when you've put it back together as best you can, what you're left with is warped. Like one of those carnival mirrors that makes you look tall or short or skinny, it's warped to unrecognizable proportions.

Now, she's started eighth grade. It's not as good as sixth was, but not as bad as seventh. So far, it's been okay for her. Her mirror is on the mend. When the mirror is complete, she knows her life won't be the same as it was before, but it will hold some semblance of what she lost. But the mirror has a long way to go. She's still patching the first row back together, and even that's nowhere near completion. But it's getting there.

Wuthering High by Cara Lockwood

Wuthering High by Cara Lockwood is the first installment of the Bard Academy series, a young adult fiction series starring Miranda Tate, a 15-year-old "delinquent" shipped of to Bard Academy, a school supposedly designed to reform teen criminals. There she meets Blade, Hana, and Samir, fellow delinquents with a knack for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. She and her friends soon discover that all is not as it seems at Bard Academy...



The writing is realistic and full of humor, making the characters come alive. Miranda is charming and quirky, and it's easy to relate to her. The plot twists are surprising and the underlying mystery that forms the story is perfectly paced.



I really enjoyed Wuthering High and I recomend it to everyone -- but don't read the blurb as it kind of gives a few things away!

Turkey, Chrysanthemums, and Cluelessness

Today is the day before Thanksgiving here in America, and this year, it’s the twenty-fourth of November. In Asia, the twenty-fourth is Chrysanthemum Day.

Don’t ask me how I know that.

See, Mom, Dad, my brother Travis, my sister Cassie, and I love to travel. We have always gone somewhere new and exciting on every school break as long as I can remember. Every year, each one of us individually researches one place we really want to go – finding the main attractions, the best restaurants, the top hotels, et cetera. Then we present our findings to the whole group, and then we all plan out, based on the climate and number of tourists in each season, when we should go where. Thanksgiving Break was mine this year, but Mom and Dad had sat us down in June and told us that unexpectedly, something had come up – I still didn’t know what, five months later – and we wouldn’t be able to go anywhere this year, at all. I was sad – and angry. I wanted to travel, to go to Asia.

So for the first time in my life, I was stuck at home, with nothing to do, on the most boring vacation of my life, while my best friend, Ingrid, is in Costa Rica with her family. Go figure – Ingrid never travels, and the one time I don’t travel, she does. And just to put the frosting on the worst baked cake in the history of the world, my least favorite, totally clueless aunt, Maree, was coming for dinner tomorrow.

“Keaton,” Dad called up the stairs, “Dinner is ready!”

“’Kay, Dad, be right there!” I yelled back.

I jumped off my bed and sprinted down the stairs, my long red hair flying behind me.
…
Dinner was the usual boring affair… NOT! For once, as if they knew how frustrated and sad I was, the rest of my family went out of their way to make me laugh. Or maybe they just noticed that the table was very, very, very quiet. Typically, I chatter on and on like my jaw is completely unhinged from my brain, while the rest of my family nods and smiles like my babbling makes sense. Not this time. I just picked at my food, pushing it around my plate, even though I usually loved eating the global cuisine we’d collected recipes of over the years.

“Well,” said Travis conversationally, “you’re quiet today, Keaton.”

“Really?” I asked sarcastically. “I hadn’t noticed. Oh, wait, I forgot I was communicating telepathically today. Right. I was concentrating so much, I forgot that I wasn’t talking out loud.”

By the way, I tend to get sarcastic and snappy when I’m anything but calm. My siblings are used to it.

“Geez, Keaton. Are you sick?”

I stared at him. Let me rephrase that last thought a bit: Cassie is used to it. A certain sixteen-year-old boy, apparently, is not.

“Ow! What was that for?!” Travis yelped indignantly, glaring at Cassie.

A small smile tugged up the corner of my mouth. Cassie’s patented ‘Please get a clue, Travis. You just overlooked the obvious’ kick in the shin had just hit its mark.

She turned to me with an apologetic smile, though why she was apologizing for Travis, I didn’t know.

“So, Keaton, remember that time in England when we went to the Tower of London and Travis wanted to experience what they did to the prisoners back in the day, only he was joking, and the tour guide thought he was serious and started to cart him off to the dungeon? Oh, and the time in China when Dad asked for directions and nodded and smiled and agreed with the guy who told him where to go, and then the second he was gone admitted to us that he didn’t speak Chinese?"

I love Cassie; she always knows just what to say. I started to laugh.

“And the time in Rocky Mountain National Park when the sign told us not to take a left turn, and we all said, ‘Yes, we know not to take a left turn, because we’d all fall off a cliff if we did’?” Mom asked.

“Or the time when…”

They went on like that for the rest of dinner, recalling the funniest experiences we’d had on our trip, until I was feeling better.
…
The next day dragged. I finally found out why we couldn’t travel for the rest of the year: One of Dad’s friends, a lawyer, needed him to testify for some case he was covering involving tomato plants (I kid you not – the case really did involve the lovely fruit). There was supposed to be several trials and other legal stuff happening at least once a week starting in December, and according to the lawyer, Dad needed to prepare for months in advance.

Anyway, Aunt Maree was about to arrive, and Cassie, Travis and I had all been getting ready in Cassie’s neat, pristine bedroom. We have this theory: If we ignore her and act all adult, Aunt Maree will stop coming for dinner.

So Cassie, unlike her usual sporty self, was wearing a short black skirt, makeup, and a light grey sweater that made her red hair and green eyes stand out amazingly well. Travis was going for the formal-sporty-high-school-boy look, which, as it did every year, utterly failed. I mean, honestly, you can’t wear a grimy football jersey with spotless, low-hanging khaki slacks, Italian golf shoes and a backward baseball hat. Which we tried, as we do every single year, to tell him, Mom and Dad included. His famous, annoying, annual response?

“Oh, come on, you guys. I look very grown up, and besides, in case you haven’t noticed, the dirt brings out the brown in my eyes, the khaki is essential, and the black helps to bring out the brown of my hair.”

Travis is the only one of our family who doesn’t have green eyes and red hair. None of us is sure how that happened; maybe some deceased relative of ours looked like that.

I was wearing a light pink skirt, white slippers and a red sweater with white embroidery. Very pretty, and I hated it.

DING-DONG!

“Oh, that must be Aunt Maree. Let’s get this over with,” sighed Cassie.

We tromped down the stairs, with me in the lead. I put my hand up to stop my older siblings.

Very quietly, I opened the door and cautiously put my head into the living room. Aunt Maree was there, of course.

I stepped inside. Travis and Cassie followed.

“Hi, Aunt Maree,” we chorused disinterestedly.

“Hello, darlings. My, you’ve grown so! I haven’t seen you in so long!” she said sweetly.

We all groaned.

“You just saw us two weeks ago,” I said in a monotone.

“At that Belgian restaurant,” Cassie reminded her.

“You had the carbonnade,” Travis told her.

“Oh, so I did…” Here she paused. “Did you want to see the toys I brought you?”

See what I mean? The comments are silly. I used to think it was funny, but it’s just plain annoying these days. Aunt Maree just doesn’t see us getting older every year. But by now, we know better than to correct her.

“Yes,” we said exasperatedly.

After a lengthy round of ‘Annoy the Children,’ we sat down to dinner. I wasn’t actually sure what we would be eating. I’d heard of a traditional Thanksgiving meal, of course, but I had never actually had one. That tends to happen when you haven’t ever been in America for this holiday. They don’t celebrate Thanksgiving in Tahiti.
I guess I shouldn’t have been astonished when Mom brought out mashed potatoes, peas and onions, cranberry sauce, gravy, stuffing, and a turkey. It was just…so American. I’d been raised on out-of-the-country cuisine, like the Russian food soleniye ogurscy (that’s salted cucumbers, in case you were wondering). I don’t think I’ve ever had a hamburger. So yeah, I was a little shocked to be eating what seemed to me an extremely normal American dish. I could see that Cassie, Travis, and even my Dad were eyeing their food doubtfully. Only Aunt Maree was digging in like there was no tomorrow.

Well, here goes nothing, I thought to myself. I took a bite.

Surprisingly, it was delicious, even to my exotic tastes. It took me very little time to eat my entire meal, and then I just enjoyed being with my family. But when Mom carried out the pumpkin pie, I found that I was stuffed. For that reason I made my excuses and left the table. I wandered into the living room and sat on the couch, looking out the window directly opposite me.

Outside, tiny individual snowflakes are falling. As I watch the snow, something dawns on me.

Yesterday was Chrysanthemum Day. Today, it’s Independence Day in Suriname, but it’s also Thanksgiving here in America.

Yesterday, I wanted to be in Asia, celebrating Chrysanthemum Day. Today, I’m happy to be here, celebrating – for once – an American tradition…with my family.

AWOL (again)

Yeah, so, I said I wouldn't do the whole AWOL thing again, and at the time I meant it. Then some things came up and I stopped. But I'm back now, and I've decided to post no matter what.

So without any further ado, I present a short story, by yours truly, above.

*For those of you wondering why I'm posting a story, I need to find a book I want to review. So, story week instead of a review. *

A Little Hope

Hope is a seed. It plants itself in your mind and grows until suddenly...hope is a tree. This metaphor never made much sense to her. She was much more inclined to believe that hope was a flame, burning brighter and brighter 'till the fear -- in the form of choking, paralyzing blackness -- was consumed by the blaze.

Then again, hope could be that story on the news she'd seen yesterday. The one where people were pitching in to help orphans get adopted. Or maybe hope is simply everywhere, and she just has to know how to look for it.

But no matter what form hope takes, she's absolutely certain of one thing: however dire the situation may seem, she can get by with a little hope.

NOTE:

*And on that hopeful note, I leave you for the next three weeks. I'm going on an outdoor expedition in Washington (State). My next post will be on Saturday, August 7. Have an awesome three weeks!!*

The Beautiful Between by Alyssa B. Sheinmel

The Beautiful Between by Alyssa B. Sheinmel is a wonderfully written story examining the lives of those touched by leukemia. Connelly Sternin, the moderately cool, self-proclaimed Rapunzel of the story, suddenly finds herself seated next to Prince Charming. She has no idea why Jeremy Cole would want to sit next to her, much less talk to her and ask her for help studying the SAT vocab section.

Jeremy, it turns out, wants to talk to Connelly because her father died of leukemia -- which is what Jeremy's twelve-year-old sister, Kate, is sick with. Only, Connelly doesn't know how her father died. No one will tell her, not even her mother.

The story is told in first person by Connelly, and her lovely fairy-tale comparisons add description while staying true to the hierarchy of modern day high school. As much as I enjoyed Connelly's perspective, I would have liked a couple of the chapters to have been told from Jeremy's point of view. I think a fresh perspective would have added a lot to the story.

Still, the plot was realistic and moving, with dialogue that flowed naturally between characters. Kate, in my opinion, was the best speaker, and I would've liked more scenes to include her.At the end of the book, there were still things I wish had been resolved, such as why Marcy MacDonald dumped Jeremy.

All in all, though, The Beautiful Between was an amazing book. I definitely recommend this to everyone!

AWOL

I'm very sorry that I didn't post on Saturday. It was a hectic travel day for me and my family, and I didn't get a chance. It was unplanned, and I'm very sorry about that. On Sunday, I got caught up reading a really good book. I realize that this is a very poor excuse, and I apologize for that too. It won't happen again. I will tell you next time I can't post, unless it's for an unforseeable reason, such as I'm sick and can't get out of bed. And I will make sure to post the very next day -- it will be the very first thing I do. I'm very, very sorry.

Big Sky

She lay in the hammock, staring out at the trees, wishing she could see all the way to Montana.

Kayla missed Montana. The way she could see for hundreds of miles, till her gaze met with the unmovable force of the mountains. The quiet summer evenings spent on Juliet's creaky old porch, sucking on popsicles and watching the sun sink below the flat line that was the horizon. The soft whisper of the grass as it shivered in the breeze.

The sky was just as big here, on the Outer Banks of North Carolina. But instead of mountains, her gaze hit...nothing. Nothing waited for her on the other side, as far as she could see. The sea and the sky just went on forever. A lonely kind of big sky.

Descisions

So, I have decided to post book reviews every other week, with short little fiction posts in between. This week is a fiction week, so I'm going to tell you about my short fiction posts.

All of the main characters are girls, and all are told in third person. Most characters will not have names, and all stories are fiction. The stories will be no more than three to four paragraphs long, and on random topics.

The first story is the one above. I hope you enjoy!

The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon

First, let me just say that parts of this book went right over my head. I didn't understand most of the math problems or his explanation of the human mind. I also realize that this book is not meant for young adult readers such as myself, and so I will not criticize Mark Haddon for this.

The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon stars Christopher John Francis Boone, a 15 year-, 3 month-, and 3 day-old genius with some behavioral issues. I believe Christopher has a syndrome, but the book does not state exactly what the syndrome is. I wish this had been a bit clearer. The novel begins in Swindon, England at 7 minutes after midnight, when Christopher spots his neighbor's dog lying dead on the ground, a garden fork in its side.

The story was beautifully written, with little interludes of explanation in between the plot. The interludes were like backstories, explaining Chrisopher himself as well as the aformentioned math problems and the human mind.

Christopher tells the story in first person. He does not speak with contractions, which makes it (usually) very easy to understand precisely what he means. When it comes to math and the human mind, or explaining why Christopher doesn't understand the constellation Orion, the explanations tend to be either over-explained or the pace is too fast, as with the math problem titled Conway's Soldiers. Also, the chapters are numbered uncoventionally -- using prime numbers only -- which gives a nice change from your standard cardinal numbers.

The plot twists, turns, and thickens as the story goes on. Because Christopher's feelings are moderately easy to empathize with, it's hard not to become entangled in Christopher's world. The dialogue sounds very real (though I could do with less swearing), and while descriptions of places are few and far between, diagrams allow the reader to get a clear idea of the setting.

My favorite part is when Christopher explains a newspaper column featuring a math problem. While most of the math problems were complicated, this one had me trying to figure out what I would have done. It's also a bit funny, because a 15-year-old boy can prove that the columnist is right when all these professors with fancy degrees say the columnist is wrong.

I enjoyed this book, and would recommend it to anyone who enjoys math and mystery -- just make sure you brush up on your math skills!

My First Review

My first review will feature The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon and will be appearing on Saturday June 19.

Getting Started

This is officially my first blog post ever. I'm going to be posting my opinions on the books I read, and maybe some excerpts from my short stories. I will update my blog every Saturday. If I take a vacation and can't post on a Saturday, I'll let you know when my next post will be. And...I think that's it for now!